"The air was deadly cold and the wind was like a flat blade of ice on his cheek"
It explains to us how the weather was like and he was feeling.
"The room it's self was filled with pleasant furniture"
It tells how the room looked like.
The landlady was trying to look as nice as possible, "the moment she saw him, she gave him a warm, welcoming smile" so then she could get him in the house, and kill him without him realizing until it was too late, "The tea tasted fairly of bitter almonds".
I like the ending when it's stops, it leaves you think about it, but if the author could add just a little more to explain what happens until he goes to bed, so we can have a bit more of the story, because it stopped too quickly.
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