Monday, 22 February 2016

Ode to a large tuna in the market

Now Dead!
The author Pablo Nerudo uses lots of interesting ways to explain ode to a large tuna in the market. He mainly uses juxtaposition between life and death. Metaphors and similes such as, "torpedo (...) missile that swam" and "Sappy as a sprung fir"  show how alive the fish was and are juxtaposed with metaphors and imagery of death. One of the most powerful metaphors used is that of the torpedo.

Torpedo of the Ocean!
Because the tuna is really fast and graceful, the motion of it is represented by weaponry used in army, "Torpedo, Missile that swam". Right next to it, a juxtaposition is placed, explaining that the once torpedo is now "Lying in front of me Dead". Because this poem uses lots of juxtaposition, there are more of these examples.

Sea-quake!
"Ode to a large Tuna in the Market" uses lots of metaphor, one of which is describing the motion of the fish, "Tidal Wave" which shows that the fish was constantly moving, like a tidal wave, because tidal waves don't stop and keep going, and then it's positioned next to "Dead Remains" which shows that after the whole fast movement and graceful swimming, it is NOW just dead, insignificant pieces. Also "Tidal Wave" show how full of life it was, just like a sprung fir.


Catafalque King
In the poem there is also a age difference, young and old. The meaning of childhood and happiness is represented by "Sappy as a sprung fir", because a sprung fir of green turmoil stands for happiness and young age, while "Dead, catafalque king" means that an old and dead king of the ocean is NOW lying dead, catafalque between all the other insignificant vegetables. The author also used "Sprung fir" as a reference to how perfect the fish is, just like a well-oiled ship of the wind.

Ship of the Wind!
The creator of this poem also used an other metaphor, "Well-oiled Ship of the Wind" to represent the perfection of the fish, that it swam swiftly in the sea, and lived a perfect life without any problems in it's life, and even after death, the tuna is "Navigating the Waters of Death" perfectly like in it's previous life, no flaws. NOW again swimming happily.

NOW and THEN
"Now" is very efficient when using along a juxtaposition, that's why Pablo Nerudo uses "now" before most of the juxtapositions "NOW simply dead remains (...) Navigating NOW the waters of death" to remind us that how the fish WAS swimming and how full of life the fish WAS, NOW it's just dead in the market. Using "now" gives the poem a feeling that makes us sorry for the fish even more.

Wednesday, 10 February 2016

Launderette

Launderette
The poem is all about mood or atmosphere ( dark shoves ) and each stanza describes something or someone. Dark mood, Positive mood,
My Chosen Stanza

The dour man does for himself. Before him,
Half lost, his small possessions swim
Cast off, random
They nose and nudge the porthole glass like floatsam.

In the last stanza it explains that The man is really poor because "half lost" and "cast off" mean that there is more water then anything else in the washing machine. "Small" also shows that he does not have a lot of "possessions", or clothes. The man is dour because he is poor. The last stanza symbolizes sadness.

2 - Smile language, doing something but not actually doing anything,
3 - Sadness
5 - Hopeful, Happy Stanza, Young Woman and Present represent hope
6 - Negative
7 - Narrow eyes reinforces the idea of
8 -

Friday, 29 January 2016

Peanuts

It was raining outside, thunders and lightning. Loud inside and loud outside.
These peanuts are making me thirsty?!
Everyone at the party was confused, scared and no one knew what to do next!

Tone - is voice
Mood - is setting, the way it's described, usually using imagery

Swoosh, swoosh, the snow was thrown everywhere around. Jumping over obstacles, while the sun shined over him. The powder was untouched and no one but him was there.
This is amazing!!!!!!!!!

Wednesday, 27 January 2016

Metaphors and Similies examples

Metaphor:

Snowboarder:
The snowboarder was a monkey in the trees.
Snow:
The snow was cotton candy.

Smilies:

Sky:
The sky was like the ocean with icebergs.
Trees:
The trees were like cylindrical, white cotton candy.
The trees were covered in a white blanket as if at any moment they would fall into a never ending somber.
Wind:
The wind was as strong as gravity.


Sun:
The sun is a red fireball.


Sky:
The sky was the Red Sea.

Clouds:
The clouds were

Wednesday, 20 January 2016

Plot 101 The Movie

Star Wars the awakening
Ordinary world
Disruption
Rising action
Climax
Resolution
Denoment - comes after the resolution

Protagonist Conflict's
- Man vs Technology - pressing the buttons
- Man vs Himself - selling or not selling bb8
- Man vs Man when Kylo Ren fights Rey

Symbols
- Darth Vaders helmet - evil
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Analogy
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Characters :
Flat:
- caricature  1 characteristic
- billy is polite/honest, trusting, curious, naive (not caring about the surroundings)
- archetype - 2-3 characteristics

Round:
- the old lady in landlady seems like a caricature, but then she seems like an archetype but actually she is a round character
- billy is polite/honest, trusting, curious, naive (not caring about the surroundings)

When the character changes during the story is called a growing character.
Conflict happens in a story so the character can change.


Plot - what happens
Narrative - the order in which the story is told

Thursday, 14 January 2016

Poem

The Woods that Bring the Sunset Near
The wind from out of the west is blowing
The homeward-wandering cows are lowing,
Dark grow the pine woods, dark and drear, --
The woods that bring the sunset near.
When o'er wide seas the sun declines,
Far off its fading glory shines,
Far off, sublime, and full of fear --
The pine woods bring the sunset near.
This house that looks to east, to west,
This dear one, is our home, our rest;
Yonder the stormy sea, and here
The woods that bring the sunset 

I am an eagle
As father gave the push, my mother whispered, “Fly, my child!”
Resplendent in my feathers, yet was frightened of the wild
unknown for that where I grew up, I had to leave and find
the reason for my wings and claws, and how I can’t be mild. 

The rush of warm wind cushioned me as I took my first flight,
majestic bird who gracefully flew to such soaring heights.
From that day on I fed myself and did my parents proud
for they have taught me not to let the prey escape my sight.

For forty years I roamed the land and soared over the sea,
but then the time had come to make the choice that’s hard for me.
Up on the steepest rocky mount, I went and by my own
removed my brittle beak, talons, and old wings painfully.

Why did I have to go through all the changes and the pain?
Those parts were worn and have become my weakness and my bane.
So now that God has given me another thirty years,
behold me after my rebirth, the eagle soars again! 

"The Eagle soars again!" The poem is about An Eagle who is let free, and learns how to fly and take care of itself. It symbolises the real life and the choices made in life. The eagle is pernificated in the aspects that at the beginning it lives with its family, like a child, and then it must learn how to fly and take care of itself, like a child who is growing up and needs to get a job and live on its own money, and then after a long time of doing this, the Eagle must remove its old body parts because they are weakening it, and so for an old person, who is not able to do what he/she could do when he/she was young. It is well written and it's presenting the human life by personalising An eagle.

The poem "I'm an Eagle" uses imagery, metaphor and personification to help personificate the Eagle. Is using a lot of sight imagery to describe the looks of the Eagle, "removed my brittle beak, talons, and old wings painfully". It uses one metaphor which says that the Eagle will live on after he removed his weakened body parts, uses a lot of symbolism to describe its life and it represents the human life which uses personification. It has a lot of adjectives and adverbs to help with the imagery and that's why it's really good.

Imagery 

Symbolism

Smilie

Metaphor

Wednesday, 13 January 2016

Symbol

The Boating Party, by Mary Cassatt
The boat is sailing on the water
The family is on the boat
Implicit - when something gives you a clue about what is
-The woman is the child's mother
-it's windy
-the man is the child's father
-they are sailing on the sea
-the boat is going towards away
-they are in a hurry
- they are married
- the man is rowing the boat

Explicit - when something is clearly explained
- woman holding the child represents care and compassion
- the man represents help and strength
- the land is representing safety